Another masterpiece, Jeffrey!
First, thank you for your dedication in commenting on other winning stories from yesterday. Because of it, you won the top prize again today! Kudos to you!!
Second, your poem was enjoyable to read. Without sounding like a broken record, I have to say your descriptive phrases are easily the strongest aspect of your poetry!
Third, I wanted to highlight and use some quotes from your poem (I tried several times to do so), but for some reason, Medium only allowed me to highlight a single letter at a time. After several attempts, I gave up. Sorry. I assume Medium is having some technical difficulties.
Overall, very well done! I don't have any suggestions to share with you, so I'll focus on what I enjoyed.
Thank you for sharing!