KR Franklin
Dec 19, 2020

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For how descriptive your poem was in describing nature, I thought the photo selection was an excellent compliment!

It all worked well together. I could imagine what you were describing, from the flower to the day, to the vision. Well done!

One suggestion: I recently read a poem with a story added after the poem. I'm not sure if you would be interested, but I would like to know what inspired you to compose the poem. Just something to consider.

Overall, I thought the strongest aspect of your poem was the descriptive imagery. Thank you for sharing!

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KR Franklin
KR Franklin

Written by KR Franklin

Just a writer trying to make a dent in the universe, one typo at a time.

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