KR Franklin
Dec 3, 2020

I agree with your 80/20 approach to WFH vs. Back to the Office. Even after the Pandemic ends, I think it would be an excellent concept for individuals who seek flexibility in their work life.

Overall, I thought your story was well-written - no grammatical mistakes, accurate headline, engaging topic, and great flow. My one suggestion would be to describe the tiers. I live in the U.S., so I am unfamiliar with Britain's Tier restrictions. It would be nice to know what they are without Googling. Just a thought.

Thank you for sharing!

KR Franklin
KR Franklin

Written by KR Franklin

Just a writer trying to make a dent in the universe, one typo at a time.

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