I have zero ability in poetry, so I won't comment on any aspects of your poem. Instead, I wanted to point out which parts were my favorite.

I thought the above section was very descriptive; I mean, I could picture this scene in nature, as well as what our minds can look like with cloudy and clear days.

I also like the part, "You, me, and all of thee." Again, I am a novice, so rhyming stands out to me. :)

Finally, I thought you ended strong - "And allowing ourselves, The Freedom, To break as often as needed." Powerful!

Thank you for sharing!

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