I really like how you began by explaining the process of developing a photograph - chemicals, exposure, red light, darkness, and quiet.

It is artistic how you took the analogy of developing photographs and related it to to the season and being present. As I finished your story, I thought the quote above provided the closure I was searching for in your story. Awesome awesome awesome job closing in the way you did.

I did not find any suggestions to share. I thought your story was poetic and artistic, almost like poetry. Great work!

Thank you for sharing!

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