I thought you took an exciting take on Dreams, and your explanations were so unique. Honestly, I don't think I've heard anyone explain it in that way. Thank you for that!!
Also, I like your message on realizing your dream, going "big and wholeheartedly," and then being bold in its pursuit. This message, combined with the impactful quotes, was very well done!
One suggestion, you may want to use more of the formatting tools that Medium offers. It helps break apart the sections, and I think it makes the message clearer—just something to consider.
Overall, fantastic message and use of quotes! I thought you did a masterful job with both. Thank you for sharing!