Inclusion is not an easy subject to write about, but I think you handled the subject delicately and respectfully. I also thought you made excellent points, especially point #2.
I can attest to this as I've worked in a corporate setting for over a decade, and diversity and inclusion are just KPIs to most companies, which is unfortunate.
Finally, I loved how you ended your message, "Inclusion...has to be done right." Very powerful message!
Thank you for sharing and reminding us of the importance of inclusion!