You did a great job approaching the topic of love. You explored both sides of the argument: waiting vs. exploring love--while sharing, which makes the most sense to you. That isn't easy to do. Most of us, including myself, tend to focus on our argument and ignore the rest.
Also, fantastic job using humor! My favorite line from your story was the quote above. It made for a fun read.
Excellent grammar, formatting, topic, and overall message. Thank you for sharing!